School Magazine Contents Page Draft 3 Final Draft

This is the final draft of my school magazine contents page.
In order to improve the second draft, i changed the background colour in order to make it look more attractive. I aslo added two more photographs of the school in order to give parents more of an insight into the school.

School Magazine Front Cover Draft 3 Final Draft

This is the final draft of my school magazine front cover.
In order to improve my second draft, i changed the background colour as when i asked some students their opinions, they said that the background colour was boring as it was plain white. I also changed the name of my school magazine as when i asked some students their opinion, they said that they didn't like the name 'Biddulph High Flyer' and they thought that it didn't suit the magazine.

School Magazine Contents Page Draft 2

This is the second draft of my School magazine contents page.
In order to improve my first draft, i re-arranged the sub-titles and increased the size of them so that they filled the whole page and there is no longer empty space at the bottom of the page. I also added another photograph showing the school acheiving their outstanding Ofstead report.

School Magazine Front Cover Draft 2

This is the second draft of my school magazine front cover.
In order to improve the first draft, i added more cross-heads and re-aranged them around the photograph. I also added another photograph showing the outstanding Ofstead report that Biddulph High School acheived; this links to the 'Results Are In' cross-head.

School Magazine Contents Page

This is the first draft of my school magazine contents page.

I asked some students for strengths and weaknesses and this is what they said:

The text overlaps her face, there is a large white empty space, the titles of the articles are a bit boring, the colour scheme reflects the colours of the school logo.

School Magazine Cover

This is the first draft of my school magazine cover.

I asked some students for the strengths and weaknesses of my school magazine cover. This is what they said:

More subheadings are needed, add a splash, use coloured background, a good font is used. 

School Magazine Preliminary

School Magazine Preliminary

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